Trepidation

Savoring
                   light
                             simple

                     drops of moments,

where interpretations live potent 

breathing one more breathe
                              with trepidation

                                   with only fear of hesitation

Reviews

[olla]

so much said in such a few words..

[Revery]

Thank you Olla, for reading and commenting. I appreciate you stopping by.

[Jack...]

The pathway calls and you may choose to listen, yet again you may choose to igonre. The beginning of the journey is always the hardest, but once past the starting line it is amazing how smoothly it just might go.

This was refreshing and a little slice of solitude mixed in with the hesitation. Simply beautiful.

[Revery]

Thank you Jack. Nice to have poets of your quality seeing beauty in my writing.

[Jack...]

It is my pleasure as seeing beauty in your words comes easy.

[rivers]

We can wait a lifetime and never take that first step that leads to a journey of a thousand miles. Admittedly this reader has stood at the crossroads as the sun went down, alone because of the trepidation of failure, knowing all the while mindfulness was just a step away.

"Savoring light simple drops of moments" this line I love... a mantra of a well lived live... This poem is deep and wide !

[Revery]

Thank you Harlon, your comments are like rain on the desert. I appreciate my friends that don't fade with time and distance. I always am flattered by your interest in my writings. Thank you again

[rivers]

It really never seems to matter when or why a lasting connection is made seemingly worlds apart, through words placed together on some public page without hesitation or trepidation...some might consider it trust which there seems to be a real shortage of these days. Others? Well I just don't care...

You are correct in that I have always enjoyed your depth and style of creative expression. It is humbling that you consider me a friend...

[Revery]

Same here Harlon, thank you.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I envision a serene walk or jog on a breathtaking trail... and getting ready to take a full-on sprint... Thoughts can be savored on a journey such as this... Nicely penned!~xo~:)

[Revery]

Thank you Robbie. I always cherish your comments.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure, my dear friend. :)