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A Poem by
Revery
Re-posting of an older Poem
I want to find the gate into your secret garden Stea l my way into your dreams and dance with you in reverie I want to be the artist of your pleasure and the strength of hope unseen I want to please you with every move and show an understanding of your sensitivity open your heart before me and receive my strength I’m yours
© 2012 Revery
Author's Note
I made some changes.
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ooooooo.... a blissful want.... a longing to be... this was just an AMAZING WRITE!!! took my breath away... GREAT JOB!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
First of all, LOVE the picture! It's a really sweet poem. I honestly love it. Lacks depth in some places, but you've made it work =) I like the effect it puts. BRILLIANT last line
Posted 12 Years Ago
First of all, LOVE the picture! It's a really sweet poem. I honestly love it. Lacks depth in some places, but you've made it work =) I like the effect it puts. BRILLIANT last line
on a more positive note; I love the word play with "steel" (gate)
There are some other really strong lines in here ;
"show an understanding of your sensitivity."
"the artists of your pleasure."
My favs.
Posted 12 Years Ago
on a more positive note; I love the word play with "steel" (gate)
There are some other really strong lines in here ;
"show an understanding of your sensitivity."
"the artists of your pleasure."
My favs.
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Compartment 114
The picture with this poem is sooooo nice, i love it.
If you're up for a challenge; think you can dig a little deeper with this one .
Great write; just wanted MORE
Posted 12 Years Ago
The picture with this poem is sooooo nice, i love it.
If you're up for a challenge; think you can dig a little deeper with this one .
Great write; just wanted MORE
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 15, 2012
Last Updated on December 22, 2012
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Revery TN
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I am a technical writer by profession. I'm married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals
with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. My life has been rich and bl..
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