Sometimes...

Sometimes, its hard to let go

Sometimes, its hard to go with the flow

Sometimes, its hard to do something you don't know

Sometimes, its hard to say 'no'

Sometimes, you need to rest

Sometimes, you need to be put to a test

Sometimes, you really don't have to be the best

Sometimes, you don't need to know what'll happen next

Sometimes, you have to conquer them all

Sometimes, you really have to let yourself fall

Sometimes, there is no support at all

Sometimes, you don't have anyone at your beck and call

Sometimes, you feel like you wanna die

Sometimes, you can't help but cry

Sometimes, you unwillingly have to lie

Sometimes, you have to say good bye

But they say that's life

They say that's strife

And to accept life the way it is,

Is your biggest challenge. 

Author's Note

when I read this again, it seems like a rap or something :P

Reviews

[Lena Rossmore]

I really like the message behind it, and good word choice :) i always love poems that rhyme as well aha

[MOON]

Lovely flows and the repetition of sometimes adds. Acceptance the key.

[deepblue04]

This is good I really like it~!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Awesome, loved the rythm and the ending
Awesome poem
Rating 100/100

[Tai Ryens]

Acceptance, I didn't expect it to be about it, but that is the main concept of it, is it not? Well done.

[Aehr]

yep, accepting life the way it is.. accepting the unfair nature of life

[natzky]

nice piece..:)
i really love the ideas of sometimes...LOL..