Me

I am like wind 

I am free and light like the wind.

I am like water

I am precious and beautiful like the water.

I am like fire.

I am warm and colorful like the fire.

I am like earth.

I am patient and productive like the earth. 

I am me.

And I know I am beautiful. 

Author's Note

Its just something I wrote to boost up my self - esteem. I really needed to do this!
Well? Tell me what you think! Reviews Please!!!!

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Nicely done. Sometimes we have to encourage ourselves.

[PurpleQuartz]

This is very nice :)

[Danielle]

This is so beautiful, try to always b happy with who you are...

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the strong statements in the poem. Good to be many things. We need to like our selves to know happiness and joy. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Laura Maidah]

Very inspiring

[GunMetal]

Yes, I loved this. There is also beauty in the ability to appreciate yourself, and I appreciate you for this.

[R.A. Youngblood]

Yeah, you really are beautiful! But i never thought that on myself, even everybody else is telling me that i am. You expressed yourself very well!
But there's one little thing that i would change if i'm on your place..
You put this "I am free and light like the wind" and on the other stanzas you would repeat the word. I would put "I am free and light"........."like the wind" it's not needed, and it doesn't make sense to me.
"I am like water
I am precious and beautiful." like this.
Of course, you don't have to listen to me, it's good overall.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[Aehr]

welcome! :) And yeah, I don't know but I thought that it had a good ring to it when the words were repeated :P

[R.A. Youngblood]

Nevermind, it's perfect!

[pumpkin head]

Very well written write. relatable as well

[AK]

I should keep telling myself this:))

[Aehr]

that helps me feel good about my inner self... only my personality and my inner self... :)

[AK]

True:) but seriously, don't worry. You are so talented in writing people will look past everything else! You totally rock me girl!

[Aehr]

awww... well you're the one who really lifts my spirits up sometimes so... yea!!! Two points for AK too! lol... you deserve more than two points of course :P

[AK]

Hehe, I'm glad I can do something good:)

[Aehr]

oh puh-lease.. everyone can do SOMETHING GOOD

[AK]

Maybe you're right:)

[Rhea752]

very beautiful and amazingly written. i love this poem it even made me feel less depressed. great job!! Keep it up!!!!! :)