Alice for a Day...

I'm Alice for a day,
I'll enter a world from far away,
Without the feeling of despair and dismay.

I'll dance with the Dodo bird,
A stupid music shall be heard,
To the Red Queen a lady should curtsy,
Because she'll always be in a hurry.

I'll paint the cards blue,
I'll wet myself with hue,
The Jabberwock I'll slay,
White Queen will say "You may."

I'll swim in my tears' current.
Dance with Tweetledee and Tweetledum,
No one will ever contradict me,
Since this is the fantasy, where I'll be Alice.

Author's Note

please review..thanks

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

I am a huge Lewis Carroll fan and have often wondered what it would be like to be Alice for a day, I like how it's a short dreamy poem my only critique would be I think you could have ended the poem on fantasy rather than repeating that you're dreaming about being Alice. Overall I enjoyed this poem and hope to read more of your wrk in the future.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the unexpected review ;D

[Talks To Trees]

I liked this. It danced. :)

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you(: