Anton in the World...

Anton in the World...

A Chapter by Joe

A continuation of Anton Falls

Adora sat upon a throne
Of skulls and broken bones.
Her head was in her hands
And she was sobbing.

"Please don't cry."
Anton spoke gently,
Not sure if she could hear him.
He was so far away.

Adora lifted her head
And smiled weakly.

"It is too late for me."
She sniffled.
"Go, Anton, 
If you still can."

Anton shook his head.
"I will not go."
He looked on at the lake
Of fire and death
And took one step into it.

© 2012 Joe

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Ah... very touching write. I know couples as tight as this.

Posted 10 Years Ago

cleverly written .. i enjoyed it ... a bit mysterious ... nice writing ~!


Posted 11 Years Ago

Very well done, good sir. Your writing seems significant, and it's wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago

It sounds like Adora has been condemned to hell.
Anton remains loyal, which makes this written quite a heartthrob.
Great imagery;
"Adora sat upon a throne
Of skulls and broken bones.
Her head was in her hands
And she was sobbing."

Keep up the great work!
This write is very alluring and well written.


Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on April 12, 2010
Last Updated on January 2, 2012



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