A Love To Far

This poem is a poem that I wrote in my Senior English class and it is something that I had to write so it has no true meaning.

I chase and I chase
Yet when I come close, you
Get farther and farther from the Que.
I don't know my reasons
Nor do I know your treason's

I think that I could follow your
Wonderful form and use my thoughts of you as my oars
To keep me going and going
To make sure that what I am doing
Is not all going to be in vain
And that my love might yet gain

Your trust and your love
Yet for now you are still farther
Than I am closer
And I must love still and forever to be above
And gain your trust
Because, Babe, my love for you is a must.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think please it will help alot

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

;) I think this is soo sweet! Especially the last line. :)
Love the way you personofied thoughts. :)

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I think it's quite touching and hopeful. It is a very lovely write. Wonderful write.