Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Drop

Drop

A Poem by Richard Guimond
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self awareness

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Drop

A drop of water in a pound....
A splash is drops of water getting ego
But are they self aware
Frozen drops illusion of immortality
Life suspended in dream,
Then one day awaking 
Life flows to its destiny 
Carrying floating self awareness

by Richard Guimond ©2015

Richard Guimond's photo.

© 2015 Richard Guimond


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The slow motion of transition between ego and true freedom of the soul
to complete awareness and humility

The ego dissipates
Like a drop of water thinking its so big
Once it hits that huge volume of water it disappears and comes to realize
It is nothing at all
But water
flowing and traveling into an unknown tomorrow
Just like that
The ego is silenced in uncertainty and put to death

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The slow motion of transition between ego and true freedom of the soul
to complete awareness and humility

The ego dissipates
Like a drop of water thinking its so big
Once it hits that huge volume of water it disappears and comes to realize
It is nothing at all
But water
flowing and traveling into an unknown tomorrow
Just like that
The ego is silenced in uncertainty and put to death

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard your work is at that level so high I just look in awe from below. Brilliant piece once more!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good writing, sir. Keep it up. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A drop in an endless sea of infinity...water changes shape to emotions. creates different patterns :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's like comparing a water drop to an individual. (my interpretation) Visual and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Richard Guimond
Richard Guimond

Beloeil,, Québec, Canada



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