Secret Rendezvous ⁓ (lil' bit naughty)

Quickie Form

 

                              You smile at me                 

   I smile at thee 

  and all the air's a'fire. 

                      You touch me there

 I do declare,

       "Such bliss you so inspire!

                  What shall we do

 I'm asking you

 is there a place to go?

                   Secrets we'll share

          while we're in there ...

     and no one else will know."

  

Richard W. Jenkins

©2015

  

"Quickie"

My own form … try one, you'll like it!  ; )

© 19 Apr 1987

Verses (unlimited) any topic:

2 minimum, 6 lines each

Verse Count:

4/4/6/4/4/6

Rhyme scheme:

xxxa

xxxa

xxxxxb

xxxc

xxxc

xxxxxb

xxxd

xxxd

xxxxxe

xxxf

xxxf

xxxxxxe

Alignment

Author's choice

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Secrets, secrets, secrets..we all have them..This, I believe has hidden metaphors through out..secrets behind the words..
One needs to read this short poem several times to perhaps, find the secret..
Quite a sensual poem..which i loved..through and through..but let's keep that a secret..okay..

[Richard🖌]

Mum's the word, Lisa Dear 🤫

Sooo, your keen eye caught those sensually subliminal secrets, eh? Few do, but I'm not the least surprised they touched your, er … interest.😏

Isn't sharing such fun?
Especially, when it's so sensually loved! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

This sharing is so amazing.. As I say such a new adventure for me dear Richard!!
Lisa

[Annie Gryphon]

Dear Richard, your creativity must be a gigantic river. Mekong and Mississippi are nothing in comparison!

[Richard🖌]

Goodness, Annie!
From all your praise, I'm going to have to make a trip to the drugstore for some Metrecal Shampoo to make my hat fit, but I dearly love it … LOL!
Thank you, Sweetheart … big hugs! ⁓ Richard

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Love this little write, Richard... who hasn't wanted a secret rendezvous? Enjoyed the form as well.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Thomas, for sharing the fun, and for the very nice compliment, as-well, My Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

I love this form, it has such a wonderful cadence to it:)

Your poem is risque, but I found it to be soooooo cute and yes a tad naughty!
Your vivid imagery leaves a very defined image in my minds eye, your writing
to perfection as I have come to know.

You have inspired me to write in this form again, thank You for sharing, LOve, Sherrill













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[Richard🖌]

Hi, Sheryl!
How happy I am you came along to enjoy this sweet little piece with me, and to receive your gratifying and encouraging compliments.
I know I'll love your version of this easy, fun form; you are so welcome, M'Lady, and I thank you, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

Please excuse my long absence, Yes I loved this and will try to replicate
your form again:)

[Richard🖌]

I knew you'd be back. ; )