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"I am real!"

I scream into the void of human consciousness.

"Hear me!" 

I demand. 

"Please try to understand!"

I beg. 

"See my soul!" 

I plead.

"Feel my presence!" 

I wail.

"Know me!" 

I cry. 

Reviews

[Érenn]

Again sorry for showing up so late for reviewing this one I know this was posted sometime back ^^' Now this is short honest and to the point. No rosy words no hidden thorns just point blank statements gunned at the readers or someone you intended to. Your word choices do justice to this piece and I like the brevity that is packed with a lot of punch. Thank you for sharing ^^

[Dogbomb3]

Nice counterpoint between the dialogue and prose. Short and effective.

[Ruth]

Concise and deeply moving...I could feel the sheer energy of this piece :)

[mou]

Short but self sufficient. A unique way to express thoughts that touch the heart.
Thanks for sharing.

[V]

Short but precise. I like the demanding, screaming tone. The last two lines "Know me! I cry." really drew me in, left an uneasy feel anywhere in my stomach but in good sense.

[Nicolás Cardona]

I liked this. It's terse and to the point. It's a simple existential shout into the cold, unending void of the universe!