Test subject

Test subject

A Poem by Ripple of Aqua

I want to be tested
Give me a challenge
I want to be on the verge of screaming for my life
I want to feel the shock of realizing you might die
I want to be torn between lives
I want to be tested
I want to make sure I'm not just a fake
You may shake your head and say 
Why would you want that?
But I can only think to myself
How can you know anything is real?
All those times you encouraged the lore
All those times you made your own thoughts contradict your eyes
All those times he yelled and you said it was out of love
I want to see if it's true
I want to see if he would stand for us
I want to see if anyone trusts me
I want to see if I can trust anyone
I want to see if given the chance I can live

© 2011 Ripple of Aqua


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Ripple of Aqua
Just a short string of my thoughts.
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How elseare we to improve if not by being tested. I really like this, I've never thought of trials and tribulations in this way but I must say. It works very well.
If you pass all the tests then you know for sure that you're not fake instead that your are genuine..! Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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How elseare we to improve if not by being tested. I really like this, I've never thought of trials and tribulations in this way but I must say. It works very well.
If you pass all the tests then you know for sure that you're not fake instead that your are genuine..! Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I like to write, a lot, and I normally have been writing books more than poetry, but I believe my stories are just far too precious to put up. I love all form of arts-fine arts, creative writing, mu.. more..

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