Crystal Mountain

Crystal Mountain

A Poem by Ashley Robel
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Mountain Climbers Challenge #1

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Crystalized mountain,

I stand before your graceful beauty.

I watch you glisten in the sun

As I place my hands upon your surface.

Marvelling at its rough texture,

I begin to climb you with cat-like grace.

With each stretch of my arms and legs

I get closer to your summit.

Your color slowly transitions

From purple to orange,

Bringing me closer to my goal.

As I finally reach the top,

I find the view beyond amazing.

I let out an enthusiastic shout,

Raising my hands above my head.

I have achieved victory,

My crystal mountain.

I have won.

© 2010 Ashley Robel


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I am entranced with the last line...so very very cool..."I have won"..very Marilyn French.

Awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Ashley Robel
Ashley Robel

Burlington, WI



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Ever since I was a young girl I have loved to write. This could have stemmed from my own mother's love of such a pass-time and career goal. I have, in the past, written many things. However, I have .. more..

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