My Dream

I posted my love's poem for me, here's my poem for him...

When the morning sun stretches
For the first time today,
I wish to be with you
To spend it this way...

I wish to smile
And hold your hand.
Not a care in the world
As we travel the land.

We'll go where we please
And not have a care,
We'll keep looking forward
It's joy we will share...

I like to dream big
And I'm not very smart,
But I can swear this
It's with you I wont part.

Reviews

[PoetryPenPal]

This is a beautiful love story that lifts people's spirits. Thank you for writing.

[Emmy]

Thank you for the kind review!

[wordman]

this is a beautiful love story longing to be with the one you love

[Emmy]

Haha thanks!

[Cryingkate]

Oh Emmy, What beautiful rhythm and expressive words. They flow so naturally and lead me into the dance of your poem.
I grade this an A minus. I would of graded you an A+ but due the some facts being wrong I just couldn't.
You see the true facts are you are very smart.
You are smart to Dream Big,tis' a wonderful thing.
Because anything that " Is" was first a thought. The whole world was created first by thoughts and Dreams are manifestations of thoughts.
I can't wait to read more of your poems. Put some coffee on please while I explore your creative world.

[Emmy]

Thank you for this lovely review!