When in France

passion filled night
you hold me tight
your lips touch mine
it feels so right

your brown eyes glow
my soul you'll know
our fingers brush
we'll take it slow

shy smiles reveal
the way i feel
my aching heart
your love will heal

we share our pain
to keep us sane
doors open wide
in blows the rain

passion filled night
you held me tight
your lips on mine
it felt so right

Reviews

[Richard Williams]

Very sensual and directly passionate.

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very nice write-with a very smooth flow!!!
perfect--every verse---I Love It!!!

james:-)

[KaySea]

so much passion. love it

[Mauricio Montoya]

I love how it comes together, I can feel the passion and it flows beautify
Excellent write

[Jeweliet]

this is very good, full of emotion. the rhyme makes it flow, which works really well, and the almost-repetition of the first stanza is effective. good write =]