B***h (with green eyes)

green eyes
wisdom of ages shines through
sun pouring on her
rise, beauty, rise

confident strides
although cautious at times
protecting her stronghold
the home she resides

so loyal
she comes when you call
expecting affection
attitude’s royal

my love
she’ll gladly accept
for awhile….
until she decides she’s above

all that
she doesn’t need you
she’s a b***h with green eyes
funny thing, she’s my cat

Reviews

[.]

i really love this (being green eyed)...
i wa sure i was a b***h-'till the end anyway :)
Oh wait-'funny thing-my cat has green eyes'
huh-lol...great poem~!!!

[nono]

Whoa! Watch the language chicky! That is wow! I was like oh wow!

and I love the ending! "funny thing, she's my cat"

I mean that is just to cute! GO KITTY GO! I got a pic of my fat kitty on here I think I'll have to check he's a year now and I love him to death he's just so fat! And he sleeps on my stomach and it hurts! I wuvs him do!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Green eyed kitty, lovely kitty. Nice work

[Joshua Donahue]

lol! great ending twist! at first i thought you were referring to a woman who tries to hide her true personality behind a cold heart. but it's still a great, short poem nevertheless!!!

[luciddreamer]

Good job...really enjoyed it

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

ha all cats act more or less in the same way. They are proud b*****s whom think they are above everyone else.

[r]

Aww! Cute, and I knew it was a cat immediately not just from the picture, but from the "so loyal///she comes when you call///expecting affection" Such a kitty-cat thing. Love it. :)

[Nicole]

I loved it the surprise ending was cool. It was wonderfully written. :)

[Forever Mine]

I liked the ending a lot. I thought this was very cute and entertaining.

[Short.Nerd]

Very nice (-: Reminds me a lot of my Cat...