Extensions eternal Drift (Part Two)

'Alive in the Stream' sequel: Words & Andi Starr brilliance, remind. Consciousness...

Extensions eternal Drift

As on going. Collaborative creativity, hides

currents as the surge, of Rip Tides.

Beyond, splendour this mystic path. Unfold...

spark and pop, as worlds. Collide

with inner dimensions, behind doors. Slide

into fragments, of fear. Put aside.

Future consideration. Differing moods, expressed.

An ideal. Garnered, at Oceans View.

Over head, in evening. The Ebb& Flow, wonder dressed.

Images impressed. In now, a mind.

Obsessed reasoned, point of view. Look. See purpose,

gather or rather, gained. Stars shine...

Down, on Mankind.

Gaze to the heavens, what do you see. Become evident.

As Angels, breath. Wonder. He shudder.

The pen to paper, where inspiration reside. Extensions,

where inner dimensions. Behind doors, hide.

That view, a gift... eternal drift. With, his Ocean Guide.

Such said, wonder, Quill an Quiver. The line...

A warble. Like a Whippoorwill.

Sang harmony, to his soul. Extensions, expand the breast.

Space & Time... no time. To rest.

Upon the knoll, Eternity. Mother shed tears, waves crest.

To pound, the shore. Outside his door.

Behind the fears, urgency. A nightingale. Soothe, once more.

With a flutter, of wings.

He lay the pen to rest, put away the tools. Knowing time,

with his spirit. Need not contend, dilemma...

As his heart, was whole. He walk out the door. To join again.

Worlds without end, where his love unfold.

On the beach, under the shimmer. Sounds of Boundless Blend.

The surf... at Rip Tide.

He sob.

The feel of Inspiration. Sent... intended. Extensions of Oceans View.

Author's Note

More of a classical stanza type format adhered to in unfolding this one, with
a slight wondering. My style in flow I guess and, no classical training to speak of.
--- Just years, of loving the space. Named Poetry...
Striving to relate Those inner dimensions, and doors. That open an close... Intermittently. I feel content as such, are things that most every one.
Engage in feeling... upon the deep occasionals, time spent. Alone with the
endless expance of the Universe... pondered.
What do you think?

Reviews

[Ruth]

I think this is positively wonderful Rodrick:)

Those inner dimensions are doors that open without us even knowing, so if we can open through inspiration, even more so a celebration! lol Utterly breath taking imagery friend!

All of the elements you have so poignantly infused into this work of art reach out towards the heart of the soul and leave the reader in awe!

Poppy xx