The great divide.

This is a poem about how waves are made and progress across the ocean to break. The memory of the wind.

Long ago the wind did breathe

And blow into an awful din

Seas did raise, and rock and break

Her memory trapped within

Waves did roll

And scatter forth

Dispersing far and wide

To end their lives on foreign shores

Across the great divide

What words she spoke

Long ago

Are lost upon the tide

And mortal being's carried forth

Like waves, only to die

Her wisdom fails to reach their ears

Caressing, from the sky

She sends a taste of immortals joy

Across the great divide

Author's Note

I have no academic experience in poetry writing, am I making any mistakes?

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

By writing " Loved it " those words I won't be flashing anything new which I do.
Well this is properly constructed and executed with way better lines.
Wish you all the best to have more opportunity to check more of you work.
I learn, again i read and learn more from others.
I learned one thing here on this page you have to properly understanding of matter to writer one master piece.

Loved it
Cheers!!!
Vikrantsingh Parmar

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:)