Heaven cries Rain

Heaven cries Rain

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson
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To Stand, the Evermore's. A Child of Courage & Strength

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Heaven cries Rain
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Turn to your right, and see. The light... is not. But manifest. Justice.
For the soul. Abused.
To the left, are the shadows bruised. An time, for the accused. To...
stand alone, and be. Judged...
For the spirit, and the challenge. Left to her and, her Motherhood.
To lose the love... of her pain.
To have abused you. As she has been, abused and. To have lost it.
Taken it out, on you. And you...
Love her anyway, through. The fear & tears. To lose, a childhood...
to violence, and the want...
of a Mother. Who couldn't help herself. Does not excuse, her rights.
To serve. The times demand...
And, the Bars. Around, her Heart. For this, have compassion. And, Pray.
That she, survive...

Love, love is the key. To your heart. it sets you free... love.

Love, is the Key!

The Lord, still loves you both. In the Light & the Dark... Cattie Rain,
do... what you must! This is a trial, that the Lord. Has thrust upon.
A Daughter he love... Heart & Soul.
That need rest and love, to unfold. Diligence. Dream Wishes...


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Write to live / Live to write, the rights. That have been. Granted... you!
I feel for you and have tears, to read this and understand.
The writings I have read, of your travails.
Now, are much better understood! All love Baby-girl...
Hugs for you, an puppy. Your comfort. I'm praying for you.

******************************************************************** For you Angel Heart ****************


Cattie. A prayer...

Gabriel
At your Service

God Loves You














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Visit this link, Cattie's trial is in June and this child. Could use our support & love. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/c_rain109/553904/
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© 2010 Rory CJ Frankson


Author's Note

Rory CJ Frankson
For the love of a Fiend in A Hard Place. I feel her need!



Featured Review

Hello Rory-
I am touched that you reached out through words to support and encourage this young one .. and what a way with words you have ... So touching, beautiful and inspiring..and sending Gabriel to her aid.. asking him i should say as Gabriel is Gabriel after all..
Beauty and love ..

Chloe

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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What a wonderful writing for someone who needs support in a difficult situation. Very thoughtful of you.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow she will really appreciate this,
its really nice to see that people still
care,

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!
A beautiful poem love
This is tear flowing material! lol I am sure Cattie will be moved and appreciate such friendship!
xx

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes we need to stand with our friends in the bad and the good times. I like the photos and the feel of compassion in your words. A outstanding poem. Your artwork and words make me glad to be able to read such great poetry from you.
Coyote

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yes i been praying for her she's also a good friend of mine very Great piece.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello Rory-
I am touched that you reached out through words to support and encourage this young one .. and what a way with words you have ... So touching, beautiful and inspiring..and sending Gabriel to her aid.. asking him i should say as Gabriel is Gabriel after all..
Beauty and love ..

Chloe

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Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is quite an interesting piece. It prose but yet nothing more than an open letter from the heart. I really like the pauses you interject in here. It created a cool rhythm and pace.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is the Key...no truer words has there ever been. Another fine write, friend.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry for this but I got so choked up with laughter at the author's note. The typo there is hilarious. "For the love of a fiend?" Is that what the ladies mean when they call me a "sweet little devil?" lmbo I really enjoyed the sentiments expressed in this poem. It's just like Lennon said, "All you need is love"...good work. And I'm certain your friend is not a fiend. lol

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words for someone in need. I can sincerely empathize - although I do not know yet the travails this soul faces I can certainly empathize with many of your sentiments here both Light and dark. Thank you for your kindness!
SiddARTha


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



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