YOU DESERVE BETTER

Move on and let go......

If I got on my knees and pleaded with you
would you please forgive me babe
just one more time...!!!
Please don't go "Stay,"


"No," (because, each time that I did
You threw me around the house
as if I was just a bit of meat..)
I am a bloody person
Not your bleeding punch bag.!!

"Oh Honey I beg you to stay."
Not falling for that again "She replied"
Hell No don't know how many freaking Chances
You have had .....
A little to late 
I am going while I have got the chance."


"But can't we just not work this out".?
You keep on promising But you always hurt
me time and time again."
this time you on your own for Keeps..

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

peace. I don't believe God ordains abuse by any stretch. You're on your own for keeps. Best thing to do.

[Mary]

powerful and passionate! inspiring!

[Sheila Kline]

And that is just where he should be!! No one deserves to be treated as this!!

Blessings,
Sheila

[Danielle]

Such a lovely poem! Any kind of abuse whether mental, emotional, or physical should not be tolerated at any degree, believe me I know from personal experience just how it can tear you down. Very nice write

[ROSALIND]

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Deletenightmute
Such a manner of being treated, repetitively, can really not be tolerated. Indeed, time to get out from under the heavy hand of abuse. The conversation that takes place in this writing portrays this to such a real degree.

[ROSALIND]

ames T. Adair
Shouldn't put up with abuse if it becomes habitual...love or not

[ROSALIND]

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Deletemagnolia
I have just read your profile and can understand your hurt. Poetry is a wonderful platform for letting go. I hope you will too someday. Meanwhile..just let it all out as we all do...Maggie

[Emerald Seas]

Keep walking and don't look back. Short write, but full of emotion and turmoil.