Poem of the Clouds

Poem of the Clouds

A Poem by Royal Phoenix

States of mind like carousel 
Are going round and round
I want to scream out loud
And do those things that aren't allowed 
My head being lost in all the clouds
And words being lost in all the vows 
Since I was born I follow wonders
Dancing with wolves 
In rain and thunders
A wild force in tune with Universe
So hot like Sun my fire burns

© 2012 Royal Phoenix


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Great opening two lines! Lovely expressions and word choices. I really enjoyed this piece very much. Excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Royal Phoenix

11 Years Ago

thank you!!!!
The rhyming is pretty sweet, I mean especially if you are going for a spoken word effect, which to me you seem to be heading for...?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 21, 2012
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Tags: sun, mind, spirit, free, wolves, new age, fire, poetry, royal Phoenix

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Royal Phoenix
Royal Phoenix

Seattle, WA



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I am an artist within and throughout of my being. I work in different mediums like photography, painting, crafting and poetry. I like to interconnect them, creating my own unique style of art. Bein.. more..

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A Poem by Royal Phoenix