Put Me Below

Bang, Bang!
Hit me quick!
Make me sick,
I want to trip.
Cut, drip!
Slice my skin.
Pull me in,
Hurt me again.
Slam, Shove!
Hate and play.
I'm here to stay.
That's not your way.
Come, kick!
Bludgeon me.
Make me bleed,
Here's sanity.
Fine, Go!
Give me hope.
Make a show,
Put me below.
Die, Cease!
Cause me pain.
Don't remain,
'Twas all in vain.

 

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I've never read a violent poem with any credence to Dr. Suess before. Originality is a chaffed adjective in this writer's abode but this certainly embodies it. This deserves triple my previous highest score, however low that may be. Keep up the good work, its nice to see talent among this wasteland of culture.