What its like Without

What its like Without

A Poem by hollywoodhotheart
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This is a free write-something i just had to get off my chest

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Darkness on a cloud of white
I wallow in my despair
Unable to see any kind of light
My magic pills have run out
I bleed down the walls
And crash
He cant understand my cries
I cant understand the lies
I provide
I don’t put much thought into anything anymore
I need the white capsules on my tongue
My mind spins in such abyss
As I evolve into a white eucalyptus
An ocean washes upon my soul
But doesn’t free anything clean
My pale hands show no mess
And I hear the reprimands
All I want to do is walk in my dreams

My eyes closed so I cant see anything

© 2008 hollywoodhotheart


Author's Note

hollywoodhotheart
If it doesnt show up in true poem format-it did for me and how the heck do u fix it?????

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Damn! Intense, big time! A really Awesome job with this one. I feel so much for the character here. And just wanted her to know that it is not her fault of all what's happening around her. It's not her fault at all. Things will get better. She deserves so much better, too. Nice work hun!

Mikey

Posted 16 Years Ago



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