When You Look at me

Old writings

You look down

you don't love

I'm covered

with suspicion

like the spiderwebs and the preminition

decieving like

some ammunition

I'm wondering if

you set up the seduction

but do you fear my reaction

what might we become to be

an uprise in my sensibilities

Do you like what I hide underneath

or is it the outside

you'd be willing to keep

is that what you'd do

it's overcoming me

-Trapped in a box-

condensating, contemplating

what your next act for me

will be

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems im not professional yet

Reviews

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Hehe, a good start :) Yea, it may need a fix'er upper, but i totally see what you're trying to convey. I like the last sentence tho. Powerful! Good job :)

Mikey