I AM ALONE

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.

Reviews

[TheKratiMittal]

"I am life's illusion"
Perfectly sums up your sensitivity!
Short and sweet :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

comparing yourself with tree and lamp.....i like that ....good one buddy

[vaishnavi]

it is true that never to trust on someone so much because your shadow too lives you in darkness
but it is also said that never let your feelings create a havoc on you so much that they start eating u up
so have a smile and have a chill pill give breaks to worries and accelerate happiness and enjoy life
because we get it only once....

[Eddie Phillips]

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

[Vivian]

Sounds nice. Kind of hit some feels in my heart

[Effector Prime]

like that tree.. like that lamp.. wow! I'm speechless!
just.. so melancholic.. lyrical.. so inward and mind bending..ly awesome! thanks for sharing compadre!

[Oyindamola Shoola]

nice poem and good use of metaphor

[Anahat]

nice comparison and expressive :)

[Eve Ola]

I am alone like a tree!! its good read n relating words are impressive . Good work