I AM ALONE

i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

 

I am alone

I am the end of own

Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end

As that, I am life's illusion

I am alone.

Reviews

[EmilyBianca]

I can relate, I am often feeling alone.

[Saddam]

Dont be. Alone is not right. Find your company and enjoy. Thanks for your compliments.

[Vidya Bacchus]

We all feel so lonely and alone sometimes .Really sad poem there Ssaad :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[ANCIENTRUNAWAY]

This is an insightful poem filled with imagery and the tone of apathy to the beautiful world around us. Amazing!

[Saddam]

Many many Thanks to you dear.

[Ahena MK]

Wonderful poem.... !!!!!! Really really good ....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback dear.

[Frieda P]

Dark and foreboding, sad lonely existence speaks volumes here....enjoyed Ssadd.

[Saddam]

Your words are so magical. Thank you dear.

[Sami Khalil]

Sorry that you are alone. May you soon find the right one...Bravo.....................

[Saddam]

Hope so. Thank you very much sir.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............................

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful yet very sad. Lovely lines. blessings my friend




i am alone

Behalf of happiness, mourn

Away by green wood, like that tree

who weeping at own pale departed leaf

Like that tree, I am one

I am alone.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Simran Kewlani]

The idea of this poem is loneliness. It is a dark poem, and that's what I love. Amazing poem. Write something about happiness and show people the bright side of you.
(:

[Priyanshi Dass]

Oh this is such a well written piece I feel like you took your time here to create this wonderful body of work for it surely shows there or perhaps your muse was truly on fire when you were writing your poem. Great imagery presented in this tragic work and a great read too. Keep writing. Have a nice day.

[Sami Khalil]

"Like that lamp, there is no lamp rope

without oil, it is come to end"

Very sad and dark poem but I like it alot. I like your analogy too...Bravo