DEPARTURE of LOVE

Still! sleep! my love is away! 

What the world are say? 

Calm! mute! dead, my love! 

Where gone, my dove? 

Oh God! what you have done? 

Parted with me, there is none. 

My reign of love is now ruin 

And sobs, distress are placed in vein. 

Now worse is my beauty 

With me who will be naughty. 

For what, my lip, my eyes, is 

By love who will increase? 

Pale, cold, my love is front of me 

Now, what would life be? 

No! I can not live with this nightmare 

I'll rid myself from the world unfair. 

Life's pretty sunrise turn into dark gloom 

I not see the white flower, bloom. 

Alone, miserable, YOU curse to live 

Oh God! death! I through this life.

Reviews

[Penny]

Sorry for the delay. The whole poem, its tone specially makes it look like an arguement with God, a complaint. One can see the painbut what I saw with it was your struggle to blame it on others. I don't know whether whose mistakes have given you this pain, but this struggle if used at the right place would surely not let you give up on life. Take carel.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend....as you suggestion, someone other tell me too so i'm trying to do new life with new view. thanks.

[Penny]

My pleasure. If you need any help or emotional support, I am just a message away.

[Saddam]

thanks you dear friend. I will.

[Khushi]

I may not know that how difficult stuff is for you. But life is valuable. Do something that will make her in the heavens proud. You are not alone U have other friends and family. I am also a friend. As for the poem, it is lovely.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend, as you can read your thought in my poem PAINFUL LOVE. thanks for your support. love you.

[Blue]

"Alone, miserable, YOU curse to live." I have been through such gloomy and depressing experiences, too, but thank God, I have overcome those.

[Saddam]

Oh so sad dear....but good thing is you are you now.Thank you very much for your reach.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Love has the power to lift us high or tear us apart, well penned :)

[Saddam]

well said dear, thank you very much dear friend...

[SAYED THANGAL]

the true love has been exposed with rhythmic balances

[Saddam]

thank you sir for this encouragement .

[Rehan Roy]

'Alone, miserable, You curse to live' This expresses the zenith of true love, when one's existence irritates him without her paramour.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A beautiful piece really that lifts the poetic mind up, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thank you very much. mai kah nahi sakta kitna khus hun. I can not tell you how much pleased i am.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much Sir....your every Review give me a different view and encourage me to do my best.

[Sami Khalil]

This sounded like a song of the sad heart...Bravo

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot sir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................