MY LOVE

can't be read, can't be said, can't be expressed.

Something that can't be read,

Something that can't be said,

Something that can't be expressed,

And that's MY LOVE for you.

Reviews

[Elisa]

Short, sweet, and ringing with truth. Nice poem!
One thing I would change though: I would make lines 1-3 say, "Something that can't be read, 'Something that can't be said, Something that can't be expressed"
It's just a minor grammar thing, a very easy fix.
Anyway, Hooray for love poems! They're wonderful!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend for your attention and suggestion..... Definitely I'm going to change that. thanks again.

[MsJewel]

Sometimes it's difficult to express just how deeply we feel for someone. Your poem is lovely

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Yusuf Qaizar]

It is really amazing how you can express so much in so few words ! Good going.

[Saddam]

Thanks buddy........ I am surprised too........

[Deepika]

Something as precious as gold,
Something which I deeply uphold,
Something that never gets worn or old,
Something that can't be merely sold ;)

My contribution to this cute and short poem.I enjoyed it :))

[Saddam]

Its beautiful dear....
You are amazing....
Thank you so much dear.

[Deepika]

Pleasure's mine:)

[Lyndy]

A short and lovely poem! Well done! :D

[Saddam]

Thanks dear.....

[anne]

beautiful lines..:))....................

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend.

[child of God]

Beautiful poem love is a wonderful emotions and your love for this girl is beautiful and the way you expressed it thank you for sharing a pleasure to read
Broken girl

[Saddam]

Thank you so much beloved poet for being so kind.......

[Sami Khalil]

Creative and so romantic, sir. You have expressed it all...Bravo............

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir for being so humble.......

[Sami Khalil]

Humbly welcome...:)...........................

[Roshan Nair]

The more we listen with our eyes..the closer to the person do we get. cheers saddam. great work again.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend Roshan. I am glad....

[Dara]

Sometimes we can "say more" by "saying less". Your poem does just that. Very nicely done!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend........