MY LOVE

can't be read, can't be said, can't be expressed.

Something that can't be read,

Something that can't be said,

Something that can't be expressed,

And that's MY LOVE for you.

Reviews

[Elisa]

Short, sweet, and ringing with truth. Nice poem!
One thing I would change though: I would make lines 1-3 say, "Something that can't be read, 'Something that can't be said, Something that can't be expressed"
It's just a minor grammar thing, a very easy fix.
Anyway, Hooray for love poems! They're wonderful!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend for your attention and suggestion..... Definitely I'm going to change that. thanks again.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Awww, this is a sweet little poem. I like this one, too.

[Saddam]

Ah...sigh....thank you very much dear.

[Praveeta]

Sweet poem on love. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

thank you very much for your sweet review. loveya.

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Rida Sarwar]

romantic and beautiful.Perfect :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear poet.

[Rida Sarwar]

pleasure's all mine :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Sweet and to the point. Yes, it is very difficult to put into words the emotion, the all encompassing feeling, the true love. I liked this. Lydi**

[Saddam]

thank you very much...