THIS VALENTINE

This valentine

 

Into the sunshine

   You in this white dress

      Like fairy white.

 

Fresh and beautiful

   Like a flower after rain

      New and bright.

 

I’m your liege

   Crazy for your attractive refulgence

      And your voice.

 

Your blue eyes

   Risen up my every abyss

      For your embrace.

 

Your naughty hair on lip

   Moonlight on cheek

      I hate them, actually, deep.

 

For saying; assume my dare

   THIS VALENTINE; I will say to you

      Will you be mine, forever?

Reviews

[Khushi]

Dedicate this to your girl and she wouldn't think of saying no! too romantic and sweet.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear... i'll be dedicate.

[Julie Spade]

Romantic , breathtaking and mesmerizing! I hope that who ever this was dedicated to that they appreciate this poem and to aknowledge how much passion you have for that special person. Simply great ^.^

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear.

[DIVYA]

I wish you love and all that wonderful is wonderful this Valentine. Because you deserve it all after writing so beautifully! Exquisitely written.

[Saddam]

aha....smile....thank you dear poet.

[DIVYA]

Welcome :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Very sweet and romantic. Hope we all celebrate this coming heart's day with romance and joy.
Nicely done.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear...

[Avinash]

All the best with your plans and yeah keep a beautiful one like this for her .. :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very sweet, dancing kind of prose that lightens the heart, well done, good read.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend for this sweet words.

[Penny]

Awwwh... captures the passion of a lover. Very nyc poem. Wish you a happy valentine.

[Saddam]

thank you dear... you too.

[Penny]

Your welcome.

[Shaquana Adams]

I’m your liege
Lust for your attractive refulgence
And your voice

Nicely penned :)

[Saddam]

this kind of poetry is my first attempt...and your word incouraged me to do so... thank you very much dear friend.