FOR MOON PERAMB

FOR MOON PERAMB

-SADDAM HUSEN

Gaiety

No society

Only my beauty.

 

Quiver

Flowing water

Edge of river

With you at weir.

 

Round

And round

With your jocund.

 

Blither

Strange eager

Flowery fragrant shower

Till the evening star.

 

Talk

Which knock

To end heart.

 

Ear ball

 Mine enthrall

Your sweet call

As easy snow fall.

 

Distress

Little silence

Even small distance.

 

Tramp

Hand inhand

For moon peramb

Away from this land.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

love it this Flow's beautifully. nice work Blessings

[Saddam]

Thanks dear....have a nice day.

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I like this you have a real way with words:)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend. Your poetry is also very good. I like them.

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Thank you lots and your very welcome:)

[Priyanshi Dass]

Beautifully written. The flow is great. A very well worded piece of work. Keep writing. Good luck and have a nice day.

[Saddam]

Dhanyawad dost. mujhe badi khusi hai. Thank you very much.

[Penny]

You are definitely growing as a poet. The title is just magical and the text very subtle. Well done.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend. That all the part of my experiments. And glad you like it.

[Penny]

My pleasure

[Addy]

I like your choice of words, well penned. It flows wonderfully. Great poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[Frieda P]

High spirited and light hearted, I enjoyed your word play here Ssadd.

Blither
Strange eager
Flowery fragrant shower
Till the evening star.

Nicely pen'd.

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear....this all give me a new look for create. thank you very much.

[Saheli]

This somehow reminded me of something i'd written a long time back. Very compelling choice of words!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have penned a most interesting piece my friend :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much...still i'm learning.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and we must always keep on learning :)

[Sami Khalil]

Very interesting word choice...Bravo................

[Saddam]

thank you sir....means i'm on right track...thanks for all support.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................

[costa siwale]

Wonderful read, I especially like the last verse well done Ssadd

[Saddam]

thank you sir....means i'm improve in myt work... thanks for all your encouragement.