POISING MOMENTS

Squalls is calling your desires

Dribbles of rain is bringing your fires.

Beclouded sky playing with moon

Fraudulence cloud took various role as protean.

Your odors in, grievancing me like canine

The embers of lunar, though, is shine.

Cascade and its tumultous colourless water

appears as your adjunction at its layer.

But i'm searching at all this environment

Why are you all poising,me, at my moment

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

This reads very well. I like the style with rhyming couplets. The 'english' is not quite right in places, but I guess that in India it would be correct. The English language has many variations! Loved the poem, short, precise conjuring up a lovely image.

[melissa]

This is awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[writ rajat]

very momenting memories get connected with this poem

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend for your stop.... Have a nice day....