HIDDEN LOVE

The rhyming of the chimes

Through the temple tho the heart

It is acting as unification

My whole world, my whole thought

 

Your hand for éclat but eyes on me

Lips praying but brow dance

You are in mixed emotion over my dare

But different story with your hair surged

 

Scolding me with pleasant heart

But concern with surround

I'm behind your a flare tippet

You are escaping but had not mind

 

That's the beauty of hidden love

No sin, no secret nor is punished

Author's Note

This is very common in INDIA to play your girl when she come for pray. This is only place that girl's parent have no issue with this, and boy also. But difficult face when both families came around then their love make a hidden sines...

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful just beautiful.

Kaze~ :-)

[Vivian]

Beautiful, but it has this sad tone to it too

[Brittany Zedalis]

Impressive work. Nice job. ^-^

[Saddam]

Thank you very much....

[Ruth]

Educational as well as thought out, wonderful write x

[A. Amos]

Good write my friend...great job

[Utkarsh Singh]

so true buddy .....i got ur point ....:D

[Sami Khalil]

That is what you call a sort of divine love. Meeting girls at those prayer places. Splendid...:)...................