One last time..

One last time..

A Poem by Aki
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Dedicated to somebody I once called a friend.

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This is the last time I'll stay behind
The last time I'll stand and watch you die
This is the last time I'll sit in the corner
The last time I'll fall back and watch you cry
This is the last time I'll trust you
The last time you'll ever turn me blue.
This the last time I'll support your habbit
The last time I'll pretend to be your lucky rabbit.
This is the last time I'll help you out
The last time I'll answer your call
The very last time I'll listen to you shout.
This is the last time you can call me your friend
The last time; because it'll all come to an end.
This is the last time I'll let you f**k me over
The last time I'll ever hear about your lover.
This is the last time I'll come running
The last time I'll ever let you think you're cunning.
This is the last time, I don't want anymore
The last time I'll ever open my door.
This is the last time I want to hear your voice
The last time I'll give you this choice.
This is the last time I'll ever see your face
The last time I'll have to pretend, and be fake.
This is the last time, I'm walking away
This is the last time, aren't you ashamed?

© 2008 Aki


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wow this is wonderfully written. i have had to turn my back on a 'friend'. so this really hit home for me. the repetition is addictive. i love it. well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this one's heavy pride-chan, real heavy with a tight flow and wired hard. a great piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That sucks but it is very well expressed and written. It is good that you have the strength to stand up for yourself so that there will be no more "last times" Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aki
Aki

Magic-Lolli-Land, CO



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