I am here

I am here

A Poem by xSamilynnx

The songs i hear playing

Make so many tears fall

Im stuck with no one to help

My backs against a wall

People i despise

See me standing here

They act like im in disguse

They walk past without a care

My so called friends

Just stand and stare

Im starting to shrink

Fading away

Like a pen running out of ink

My memories are starting to desolve

But there are things

things i need to resolve

Stories i need to tell

About the happiness

From before my heart fell

One by one

My smiles may clear

Then i will see

That happiness is still here

The time will come

To show you all the truth

To show you i am not dumb

To show you i am here

© 2013 xSamilynnx


Author's Note

xSamilynnx
im pretty sure some words are spelled wrong sorry

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I really, really like this piece. It has to be one of my favorites of yours. It showcases the ever relentless heart of mankind to try and find the good in life. To search for the eternal optimism that must be there even when things are at there worst and just seem to keep falling apart.

"Stories i need to tell
About the happiness
From before my heart fell"

A nice little stretch of verses, in my opinion it made up the core and turning point of the poem. As for grammar I didn't find anything misspelled, only the word I being lowercase every now and then, but who doesn't deal with that issue?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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xSamilynnx
xSamilynnx

thornton, CO



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