You know me

You know me

A Poem by xSamilynnx

You know me as the girl who hates

You know me as the b***h

You know me as the stupid cutter

Who has nothing to do but be a witch

You know me as a sister

You know me as upset

You know there's more to me

Then just a little "s**t"

You know me as a daughter

You know me as a liar

You know me and my flaws

And you treat my brother higher

You know me as a friend

You know me as a writer

You know me and my secrets, full of shame

But still there's more inside

© 2012 xSamilynnx


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Nobody every knows anybody completely...

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful piece indeed. With heavy hitting lines like:
"You know me and my flaws
And you treat my brother higher"
That just tear and dig into you when you read it, this poem lets it all loose and bears the feelings of the narrator openly and without even trying to mask what emotions they're going through. I thought it was an excellent poem.
one typo: "You know thers more to me" missing e at the end of the word there's.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good Kurra :) it was great n very strong

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is deep. Great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, such a powerful, kind of sad write.
Amazing flow. Deep and personal, well written.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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xSamilynnx
xSamilynnx

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