Why?

haha well its kind of a sequel to my poem Did you?....

Why do i feel like this?

Why is there pain deep inside?

Why do i hurt,what do i miss?

Why do i feel like i should hide?

 

Why am i here?

Why am i stuck in this gloom?

Why do i fear?

Why cant this flower bloom?

Author's Note

its not as good as i thought... sorry :....thoughts?

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

I agree with Lei, reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Jim Croce: Tomorrow's gonna be a brighter day. Things may seem down but as it says in the song: "Nobody ever had a rainbow, until they had the rain."
One typo: "Why am i gere?" instead of here. ;)

[lei]

because we're human and we're prone to hurting, that's why we're feeling these things sometimes..... cheer up, there's always a rainbow after the rain...