Jellyfish

My friend wanted me to write her a poem about jellyfish x3 so here it is

Jelly jelly jelly fish

Jelly jelly fish goes squish

 

Jelly fish flops and floats

Jelly fish get squished by boats

 

Jelly jelly jelly fish

Jelly jelly fish goes squish

 

Jelly fish swims swift and sweet

Jelly fish will sting your feet

 

Jelly jelly jelly fish

Jelly jelly fish goes squish

 

Jelly fish here and there

Jelly fish are everywhere

 

Jelly jelly jelly fish

Jelly jelly fish goes squish

Author's Note

My friend wanted me to write a poem about jelly fish for here so yaa.... here it is haha enjoy x3

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

hahah this is fun

[Mockingbird]

your use of alliteration is phenomenal. the repetition of 'squish' makes it lyrical. good stuff.

[Daniel]

This would make an excellent tongue twister. I tried but got stumped after the first two lines, to damn hard. Other then that, the poem was enjoyable. :)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Interesting and funny, but I don't think you needed the repetition of "Jelly jelly jelly fish jelly jelly fish goes squish" at least not so often. Maybe just at the beginning and the end.
Still, cool job :)

[Angelic Surrender]

This is cute. Reminds me of a video on youtube by julian smith

[Max]

hmmmm, interesting is all i can come up with.

[Marie]

This is a cute funny poem. Also a squishy one.