love hurts

u make me smile,

u make me laugh,

but most of all,

u broke my heart in half.

I knew this was here,

i didnt want to believe it,

but now i have to hear it.

u look at me,

i look at u,

cant u see im in love with u.

but u know this could never be,

cuz i love u and u dont love me!!

Reviews

amazing......

[Susan14]

this is amazing, it truely is a heart felt poem. i can totally relate to this because something like that is happening to me right now in my life, the last line brings the whole poem together, nice job keep it up, can't wait to read more of your writing soon, keep up the good work, and write more soon

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i can relate to this so much . good work

[Brittney]

whos it about?