My perfect world

My perfect world

A Poem by Sunny

My perfect world:

When I think of my idealworld I see,

Children laughing,

giggling,

smiling.

 

Birds flying free,

Whistling,

Singing.

 

Elderly people walking,

Smiling,

Reminiscing.

 

People loving,

Caring,

Sharing.

 

I see a world of peace,

Harmony,

And meaning.

 

One with happiness,

Joy,

Fun.

 

No bad,

No worries,

Nothing to care about other than the present.

 

That would make my perfect world.

© 2012 Sunny


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Author's Note

Sunny
So. What do you think?
It was a quick piece and i just thought I'd share it.
Please give me advice on how i could maybe work on it, give me yuor opinion on it.

Thanks!
:)

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EJB
great job. The meaning behind this is really nice and calming. Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sunny

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