overshadowing

overshadowing

A Poem by Sar Jayne
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It's better to crouch down and let the water flow over, than to stand tall and let the water knock over.

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I am a flood
over throwing, overpowering
you can't get away, i tell you
you can't get away
over flowing
i am the torrent
that only subsides when
destruction has been reached
get caught by the current, i say
get caught by the current
overcoming
shall i pass you swiftly by?
without a second glance?
ruining, without a second glance?
But no
i want to get to know,
know you intimately
every crack of your skin
every form of your body
ruining, without a second glance.
overshadowing, i take over
don't let you get away
get caught in the current, i say
get caught in the current
 i am a flood.

© 2010 Sar Jayne


Author's Note

Sar Jayne
a friend told me that sometimes i am a bit much. that others feel like they can't be themselves around me. because i am too much. too out there. so i am a flood.

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Added on January 16, 2010
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Sar Jayne
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