Sar Jayne

It would sound weird to say i want you to comment on my heart. But that is essentially what i am saying when i ask you to comment on my poems. I would like your feedback.
I am a girl who lives in Madagascar(no, not the movie the country) i have written poetry since i fell in love. since i fell out of love i am still writing poetry. i love Jesus and He loves me and so i love everyone else. I believe love, selflessly loving is the only way to have true friends. i give myself to my friends. if you have me as a friend, you will have me for life.