Summer Into Fall

Summer Into Fall

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Summer Turns To Fall

The hoar's frost sits heavy upon the grass Icy fingers slipped into pockets Damp wet days penetrates old bones Shivering golden pears fall Abundant harvest ends Those shortening days bring Family by The warm hearth Light snow Falls So Summer Has gone now Summer's signal To leave, wet days, cool Nights, crackling sound of grass Shivering in the morning Icy fingers warmed by the fire When an abundant harvest's through. Tonight listen to the first light snow fall

© 2015 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Written for a contest about summer turning into fall..

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Such a beautiful form and flow... and how enchanted are these seasons of the world, flowing around us like waves of magic, warmth of days melting into the chilled nights. These words moved me so much and transported me into the sky.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

Craig,

Your review was uplifting..Thank you for stopping by..I appreciate the time sp.. read more
I love your vision of fall here. The poem is beautiful, a grand vision of nature in its ever changing seasons. Very creative and well written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

CS,

Thanks for reading my work and taking time to comment..I think that I placed with.. read more
Coyote Song

4 Years Ago

You're welcome. I think you met the challenge for the contest.
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

Okay...Sara
A very visual and emotional poem about fall. Very beautiful. Your words describe the season I love mos. I also enjoyed the format of this poem on the page.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

MO,

I did place with this one but not as high as I would have liked to place..Win som.. read more
Miss Owl

4 Years Ago

Wish you could have won what you wanted. :)
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

Thanks...Sara

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Added on September 29, 2015
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Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Thomaston, GA



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