rotten

Haiku

rotten apple

splats on the ground...

firm apple rolls

Author's Note

Modern Haiku..

Reviews

[Miss Owl]

I can visualize this and hear the apple hit the ground. Great haiku!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

MO, Thanks for droppng by..I am glad that the work brought to mind a picture..Sara

[Miss Owl]

You are welcome.

[David Scott]

Perfect! Like a prophesy. Wisdom can be found in these words.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

David,

Thanks for the review..Yes, it is tried and true so it will be a prophesy...read moreDavid,

Thanks for the review..Yes, it is tried and true so it will be a prophesy...

Sara

[Coyote Song]

Love this one. I've seen that scene many times in the apple orchards.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

CS,

Yes, a good apple rolls at least a little ways..Thanks for stopping by..

Sara

[Coyote Song]

You're very welcome, my friend.