Honeymoon Getaway
A Poem by
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Ten lines, five syllables each line ....About a picture
Previous Version
This is a previous version of Honeymoon Getaway.
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From room with prospect
Each one could see all
Through archway vista
All that clear blue sky
Quickly run_ocean
Promising sun_fun
A day at the beach
Warm sun, suntan oil
Cool water soft surf
. Isle of Ancient Greece
© 2010 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Author's Note
In response to a picture of an alley or ancient ruins with an archway with only blue sky being seen...
Reviews
the visuals are great and you suggest the intimacy beautifully here.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I too use pictures to inspire my writing. You did well here. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I too use pictures to inspire my writing. You did well here. Thanks for sharing.
coolio i can see the pic!
Posted 13 Years Ago
coolio i can see the pic!
Nicely done. Gave me a lovely vision as I read along.
~True
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nicely done. Gave me a lovely vision as I read along.
~True
A beautiful poem. Those old places of beauty make us come alive and want to see everything. I like the description and story. You have great talent. A complete beautiful poem in so few words.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. Those old places of beauty make us come alive and want to see everything. I like the description and story. You have great talent. A complete beautiful poem in so few words.
Coyote
Wonderful! xx
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wonderful! xx