Bubbles Ascent

Short, Than-Bauk,Think more than meets the eye

Iridescent

Bubbles spent burst

Ascent over

Author's Note

I do not know who the artist is or the name of the work..Than-Bauk is a Burmese type of poetry..It is three lines with four syllables per line..First line the rhyme is the fourth syllable, the second line the third syllable is the rhyme, and third line the second syllable is the rhyme..Sara

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You're wonderful in that you explore different forms of poetry and in turn create words that really sing. Can't see the picture, sadly, but looking down to Craig's comment it must be the famous Millais painting which I know. Your words make a wonderfuly accompaniment, Sara.

[Desert Dreamer]

Bubbles, like dreams. Love the new (to me) poetic form!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Ooooh...
Really expressed the beauty of bubbles here!

[An owl on the moon]

Your work perfectly compliments Bubbles by John Everett Millais. There is a magic in the shimmering colors that dance on the crystal surface, and in your words.