Exquisite View

Sonnet, Written for a contest

Arriving there, opened door to floors bare

Moist was air, dwelling effusive with peace

The enigma of time began to cease

Oblivion to all but ocean, just stare

 

Simplicity for a few days; nowhere

to go, timeless, watch Gulls instead of geese

Yesterday's ravenous problems release

Now live on sublime seaside oasis' air

 

Aster, Willow, won't sway in zephyr this day

Only kaleidoscope color 'pon water shone

Exquisite view for me, myself,  alone

This ecstasy delight not auspice by they

 

Lilac, Lily doesn't bloom, chrome rust away

Impervious bug repellent glistens on defiant stone

 

 

Author's Note

Given a list of 70 words had to chose 25 for a contest..

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Amazing work you did here. I enjoyed reading this. Love the vision that it gave me as I read.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Hello Georgia, I love it.......absolutely beautiful.

[An owl on the moon]

Your sonnet plays songlike over these spring shadows... beauty unleashed from earth's bounty... Wondrous, remarkable view to be sure...