The Ocean

Below the sun

in the sky

Upon the sand

far below 

The ocean holds

every breath

And hides

every sorrow

It becomes the eye

of the beholder

Crashing waves

with every emotion

Eavesdropping on

happy endings

Comforting the

lost beginnings

Made of the

tears from others

Everlasting from

the many colors

Reviews

[Devesh]

Loved the metaphors you used in this poem!

"The ocean holds
every breath
And hides
every sorrow"

These lines are just wow. So much meaning! Beautiful job! :)

[SaraJayne96]

Thank you very much Devesh :)

[Devesh]

You're most welcome! :)

[Echoes of Eros]

You weave a beautiful wonder through your magic and metaphors. The ocean lives in my soul, and you make the waves surge and flow and wash away the world. xox

[SaraJayne96]

Thank you very much Echo :) I'm glad you feel the same connections with the ocean as I do :) xoxo

[Echoes of Eros]

Yes, how I wish I could live by the ocean; let the waves sing me to sleep. Sweet dreams to you now. xoxo