Love Addicted

Love Addicted

A Poem by Sarah Hobbit

Being in love is like most addictions, in a way

your first kiss puts you on a high for a day or more

after that you keep trying to match that first high

the kisses get longer and more passionate

 

just like other addictions

the more you do

the more trouble you can get in

the more risky it becomes

© 2019 Sarah Hobbit


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The first sweet kiss allowed us to dream and find hope. We need good addictions to keep us strong and having no fear.
"the more you do
the more trouble you can get in"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very true words, and I like the comparison between love and addiction, I think many of us can relate to that feeling. Wonderfully expressed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well done. And so very true in such an exquisite way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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EMF
This one is terific too.

Please keep writing. I don't read poetry much, but yours I want to

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 9, 2011
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Sarah Hobbit
Sarah Hobbit

Shire, New Zealand



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Hi i'm Sarah. I am just living the mundane life. I really like art, poetry, acting, Shakespeare, J.R.R. Tolkien, and old books. Some of my fav poets are as follows: Elizabeth Barrett Browning, John.. more..

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