Briaic Daydream

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips

My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist

Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!

Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst

Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse

You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight

My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

Author's Note

This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

Reviews

[Ripple of Aqua]

This is so sweet. You can tell that you live this girl, not only for her beauty but for her as well. Hope you dance on clouds forever together.

[Kenneth The Poet]

You are excellent at the rhythm and flow.

[lois]

This flows beautifully.

[sweta'karman']

it may be a lyrics to some song..very nice flow of words readers are singing while reading..

[Birdman313]

I like the flow to this romantic poem this is really good

[Maddie]

Very well written! The flow is really nice and brilliant, and I like how the poem gave away little information, but somehow told so much out of how little there was! Good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Dancing with skill. Does make the lady happy. I like the desire and the description in the poem. I like the ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shy Girl]

I thought you danced well... :) Your description of your feelings as you held her close to dance, made a clear image for me. (Can't dance any better than just as you are, BTW) Grace is overrated, and a matter of opinion. (the grace is in the encircling of the embrace) Wonderfull expression of your love and drive to better yourself for your loved one. (If only every guy followed your lead) :)

[Andrea Vargas]

This was beautifully written, and it is so good that people out there can still be inspired by the mysterys of love..

Good write. I really enjoyed

[Missy Moooooo]

This poem is amazing, well written, and that girl is luck to have a guy that can write. has she seen this piece?