Briaic Daydream

Briaic Daydream

A Poem by Warren L.G De Mills
"

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

"

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips


My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist


Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!


Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst


Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse


You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight


My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

© 2011 Warren L.G De Mills


Author's Note

Warren L.G De Mills
This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

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This is so sweet. Well written also.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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EMF
A wonderfully romanctic poem, and your love shines through. A wonderful piece. Loved every little, romantic bit. Great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is extremely romantic and from reading this wonderful poem I can really tell that you love her. I say shes lucky to have someone like you in her life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Romantic! It shows the love that you have for her. She's very lucky!

Posted 12 Years Ago


oooohhhh.... very nice write!!! the romance and desire for your love... lucky is the one you write this for...I can appreciate a man with such feeling!
thanx for sharing honey!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice sensual details!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good, well expressed....

I don't get the second line, I would suggest something besides palcid, perhaps longing stares or wanton glares?

And you could get rid of "there" in there you smile at me? it still flows...

Anywho, well done ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very well thought out piece, I am sure your girlfriend loves it. You don't were your heart much do you? Really good piece man, I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The poem and especially the ending is so romantic in a very classical theme. Your heart upon your sleeve for your lady, beautifully penned my friend. Keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Roe
this is very sweet i love it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Warren L.G De Mills
Warren L.G De Mills

Port -Of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago



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