Briaic Daydream

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips

My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist

Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!

Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst

Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse

You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight

My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

Author's Note

This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so sweet. Well written also.

[EMF]

A wonderfully romanctic poem, and your love shines through. A wonderful piece. Loved every little, romantic bit. Great work

[Dove]

This is extremely romantic and from reading this wonderful poem I can really tell that you love her. I say shes lucky to have someone like you in her life.

[BloodyMary]

Romantic! It shows the love that you have for her. She's very lucky!

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhhh.... very nice write!!! the romance and desire for your love... lucky is the one you write this for...I can appreciate a man with such feeling!
thanx for sharing honey!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

nice sensual details!

[Michael of Gilead]

Very good, well expressed....

I don't get the second line, I would suggest something besides palcid, perhaps longing stares or wanton glares?

And you could get rid of "there" in there you smile at me? it still flows...

Anywho, well done ;)

[realmwriter]

This is a very well thought out piece, I am sure your girlfriend loves it. You don't were your heart much do you? Really good piece man, I like it.

[Inyourshadow]

The poem and especially the ending is so romantic in a very classical theme. Your heart upon your sleeve for your lady, beautifully penned my friend. Keep em' coming

[Roe]

this is very sweet i love it